Our lives we have been experiencing might be similar with others' one in most of cases. Most people go through similar experiences in their lives.근데문맥상 Everyone goes through different experiences ~~ 이렇게 써야 하지 않을까요? :) Thus, listening to others' advice about life makes our lives happier. This is because when listening to others advice about out lives, we can have various point of views about it. Also, when we have problems in our lives, other people can see this more practical.
First of all, by listening to our family or friends' advices, we have can learn various perspectives about life our lives. Our intimate people ranged from parents and teachers who are old to friends who are young help us to see our lives in a variety of views. People who are intimate with us such as our parents, teachers and old friends help us to see our lives in a variety of point of views. For example, from my experience, when I had some problems in relationship with my friends my old friends' experience was were so helpful to solve this because they have had(과거완료) undergone similar problems with their friends. However, if I had problems whether entering university directly or studying one more time to enter better university, my parents or teachers' opinions were much more valuable to decide this. Moreover, when I was making a decision whether to enter the university I was accepted to or study another year to get into a better one, my parents and teachers' opinion was very valuable.
Also, when we have some personal problems, in out lives other people can see this in more practical way. In case of personal matters, we generally are attached to them feel this so emotional that it disrupts logical thinking about it. However, other people see our personal problems more practically/clearly and thus give us more precise views about it. For example, when people break broke up relationship with their girl or boy friend, it is so hard to see this problems in a practical and logical way because love is not practical but emotional. Thus, their misleading thinking/action frequently spoils situations of them. In this situations, they have to listen to others' advice to keep their self-esteem high. maintain their confidence.
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