Some people might assert that only planning carefully can end up in the best solution. However, I believe that creative thought can make a better result than complicated plannings. First reason is that a breakthrough idea can literally break through the problem in a short time. Second, the Internet can help creative people to be more likely to succeed.
To begin with, we can solve problems easily with creative thinking. For example, in Seoul metropolitan city, traffic jam in central area has been a serious city problem. Many governors tried to take measures to release the traffic problem. They announced a number of new plans but there they were not any effective plan. However, our mayor suggested a breakthrough idea, bus-only lanes. And now, the creative policy has contributed to reducing the traffic jam considerably. This shows that creative idea can cope with the problem effectively and help to save time and energy.
On top of that, thanks to the development of the Internet, creative person become more likely to make a success than the past. Nowadays, online learning is gaining in more and more popularity. One advantage of online learning is that it provides a variety of courses as opposed to standardized school education. Besides, it is so cheap and convenient that we can learn easily whatever we want. Also, Internet users can get countless useful data by sharing information with others. Access to diverse information helps people to develop creativity. It comes as no surprise that more and more people make a great success in cyber space based on their creativity and numerous learning sources. For example, there are many successful professionals such as online writers, cartoonists, and designers who would not be likely to do without the Internet. As these examples shows, I strongly believe that innovative person will be more likely to success in cyber space.
**인터넷은 careful planning 이 아니라 instant한 스타일의 매개체이다 ~ 이런 내용을 좀 더 추가하면 좋을 것 같아요.. 위 문장을 지우고요 ~
To conclude, creative individuals can make the best results than those who plan carefully because they can solve the problem quickly and use the Internet properly. In addition, on any given day, being creative means having more chances to success.
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