▶ Your Answer : Some people might say that the most important characteristic of teacher to have is to get ability to communicate effectively or concern for students. However, in my opinion, The knowledge of the subject is the most primary things that teachers should have for the following two subsequent reasons. To begin with, students would only admire and follow teachers who are intelligent and have a professional knowledge. To be specific, in the current world, teachers are required to have deep knowledge. A teacher with deep knowledge is regarded as 'a person of intellect', while others who lack knowledge are simply ignored by students. This is why knowledge of the subject cannot be overlooked. For instance, there was a survey conducted by a group of Munsung high school students with 200 as respondents. The purpose of the survey was to understand their thoughts about characteristic of the certain teachers that they admire. An overwhelming 85% respondents replied that due to teachers' professional knowledge, students follow their teacher. On top of that, if teachers do not have enough information to teach their students about their majors, students would spend time and money to extracurricular tutoring. It is not practical and will not help students to save so much time and money. To be specific, If students waste time doing additional extracurricular education, does time wait for students? The answer would be no. Since students cannot turn time back, students must use time productively by meeting good school teachers. In the high school period, time is gold, so students must save as much time as they can. In this sense, teachers should qualify of knowledge of the subject. For example, i will talk about A high school to elucidate my point. In case of A high school, there was notorious for low degree of their teachers' professional knowledge. So most of the students took many personal tutoring and enrolled in academies. The school decided to employ capable teachers and the result was a big success. After employment, students began to focus on school education and stop extracurricular studies. To sum up, teachers who have ability would only be admired by students. Moreover, It is just a waste of time that students study under the incompetent teachers. In this regard, i strongly think that the most important virtue is to get knowledge of the subject
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