■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :How do movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. |
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Since a television and movie are invented, people's lives have extremely changed. They are one of the powerful media to people. People spend most of leisure time to watch television or go to movie and get a lot of influence from them. First of all, most visible change by television and movie is a change of leisure time of people. Nowadays, most people turn on the television whenever they enter the house and keep watching it. It has become a kind of modern people's habit. For example, according to the research of media bureau, the percentage of people who spend a time watching television or going to movie has been biggest since 1940s. Especially, it upsurges recently, and it is a remarkable trait in modern society. Not only that research but also in my case, I usually watch television or go to movie whenever I get a free time. It is a part of my life. In short, television and movie has changed people's way of enjoying their spare time. Secondly, since television and movie are very visible, it directly affects to people like their fashion or behavior. A television program or movie have a very strong visual way to viewers, and it forms people's taste. For instance, when the movie star whose hair is curved and short is very popular, most women want to have that hair style as want to look like her. At that time, I can see several women who have short curved hair style in every street in my city. It shows that how powerful television and movie. Moreover, it has a big effect not only to fashion but the life style of people. When the drama which shows very modern interior of house was very famous, my mother also wanted to change our living room like that house in drama, and she bought the table set which is same with one in the drama. In other words, television and movie show images that has strong power that can change and affect to people's behavior, taste, and thought. To sum up, television and movie has given great influence to people's life; it changes the way of spending a leisure time, and also great affected on people's behavior and thought through the visual images that they have. Since they were invented, people's lives are very changed, and their influence is going to keep. | |
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