Some people say that we should solve our important problems by ourselves or with our families, and thus help from the government is unnecessary. However, I disagree with their view because there are a lot of problems that can be solved more effectively by help from government. Most of all, government help us to solve financial difficulties when we suddenly are in a hard bad economical situation. In addition, we can be helped by government when we are are dealing with criminals. in difficulty with criminals.
To begin with, while we are in a trouble with a sudden bankruptcy, government helps us to overcome such a problem. In these days, it is hard for many people to cope with financial problem that can happen abruptly such as Asian financial crisis. At times, government’s subsidies to people who are in such financial difficulty can be a great way to overcome their problems. Take my friend Kim’s case as an example. When he was a high school student, due to failure of his father’s business, he was about to drop out of school. However, thanks to the government’s tuition support program, which is for the students who cannot pay for their tuition because of the financial difficulty, he could continue his study at school. As this illustrates, government’s financial assistance to people with economical difficulty can be very helpful and contribute them to get over their problems. And I’m sure that these help by government might will give hope to them.
Moreover, when we are attacked by a criminal or have a problem with others, the government can help us to solve these problems. Of course, some can say that it is better to solve by themselves when we struggle with others, not than just to go to the police office. However, there are many cases that we cannot solve by ourselves such as being rubbed properties robbery of property by some thief and so on. For example, one day, one of my friends Yee had was attacked by one gangster in the street. At first, he would like wanted to solve it by himself. He gathered all of his friends and would go went to find the gangster. However, he could not find him and, even if he had found the person, such a response could have made another problem. After following one friend’s advice, he went and reported to police office and reported. After all, Eventually, the police found him the ganster in a few days and sent him to a jail. In this regard, there are many cases that government power helps to solve our own problems.
All in all, we should not underestimate the necessity of government help in some of personal problems. The government helps us to overcome our problems in many aspects of areas such as financial difficulty or public orders.
**예제도 좋고 매우 잘쓰신듯~! 시제오류만 주의해주세요. 그리고 한가지더 보태자면 help란 단어가 넘많이 나온듯ㅎㅎ govermental aid, assistance, support 등 여러 단어 사용하면 더 좋을 것 같아요 ^^ |