In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still
students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using
specific reasons and details.
It is no doubt that it
is important for students to study hard and achieve students’ goals. According to
get high score, it is more likely to enter a better university, and this would
make better opportunities of getting a better job. However, life is not just to
make money or get a better job. I strongly believe that it is better for
students to have jobs in that working enables them to experience various
aspects and helps them to adopt society in future.
To begin with,
working of students allows them to experience various aspects. These days, most
of students spend their time on studying for entering a better university, so they
do not know how to diverse the world. However, by working, they would learn life
lesson, how to live the society and even they would find their true dream or
life. For example, when I was high school students, I worked for a studio to
produce music albums. Before I worked the place, I was not interested in music
and I had no chance to meet artists and communicate with them. However, by
working, I experience various aspects including making music albums and
producing beats and I felt what true happiness is. I made remembers never
forgot.
Secondly, working of
students helps them to adopt society in future. In this society, there are many
thing would be changing and diversifying. In this sense, it is significant how
to adopt and live well in this society. If students only occupy their academic goals,
they are driven to ignore complex relationships. According to a recently
studied by Samsung Economic Research Institution, when employing a person, working
in the past is hardly considered. Based on the study, those, who worked many, are
more likely to cooperate with others and deal well with problems arising from
complicated relationships.
To conclude, it is better for students to work so that they
could experience various aspects and well adopt society in future.
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