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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.
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People have to work to make their livings. The thing is that in what age should people start working? In the early society, nearly 8 years old 8-year-old kids were forced to work, still occuring and this is still true in at undeveloped countries. Also, In modern society, most of the people enter society in their 20s. above age of 20th. What I believe the appropriate age to start working should be is when people are teenage students. They can learn about monetary values and prepare for social entering.
To begin with, working enables teenagers to better understand about features of money. This is important because it is an undeniable fact that money is one of the most fundamental elements of human livings. It is impossible to learn This kind of knowledges are incapable of being learned from schools, even though this sounds cruel. it's crucialty. For example, one of my friends John, who had grown up from in wealthy environments, went bankrupt right after graduating from high school. He did not go to a college and In spite of a fortune his parents gave him, he had been fraud conned and got lost all of it simply because he did was not familiar with monetary values, which he could not learn from the school. This shows us how important it is to know about money. to know about money is.
In addition, student can adjust to society well by working part-time jobs in their school years age. This is because the activities could be deemed as actual situations of society. It allow them to be accustomed to the society they will get into after graduation. According to a study, students who worked in as a teenager showed higher social abilities overall than students who did not. The students usually have strong relationship with their co-workers and get promoted fast.
In conclusion, because students are able to comprehend traits of property, which schools often do not offer as a course, and get familiarized with real society situations, it is better to have teenage students to work part-time jobs. Nothing is worthier than experiences. | |
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