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In this set of the materials both the reading and the lecture deal with the Everglades. To be specific, the lecture brings solution for the everglades problem that reading states.
First and foremost, the reading goes on say that invasive species are serious issue for the everglades. Paperbark tree spread rapidly in the everglades and make them to swamp. On the other hand, the professor brings solution that enemies can decrease the paperback trees and prevent to be swamp in everglades. Insects can eat paperback tree’s leaves and make them not to spread rapidly.
Secondly, the writer insists that because of the chemical fertilizers, the region is water pollution. This chemical can kill other animals and plants. While, the speaker suggest the way to solve this problem that limit the fertilizer and make the standard emission for the fossil fuel burn, damage will decreased.
Lastly, the author says that the most serious problem is that there are losing water supply in the everglades. Where as, the lecturer proposes the method that removing the dam and cannel, water will fill up again to the environment. We need to wait and give a time to recover.
점수: 27 지적할 부분이 없는 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박하는 것인지를 보는 에세이입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우는 리딩이나 리스닝 둘 다 서로 구체적으로 자신의 정보를 잘 서술한 거 같습니다. 각 페시지의 구체적 설명 덕분에 주제에 대하여서 서로의 견해가 무엇인지를 잘 알 수 있었던 에세이였습니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |