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First and foremost, the reading goes on say that the increase in the amount of carbon dioxide makes the water evaporate, so this lack of the water caused damage to crops. In other hands, the lecturer brings the method that development of the technology, GN plants can grow in a little rainfall. They can grow in a (뒤에가 복수라 앞에 a는 없애주시는게 맞습니다) dry conditions. It could be effective method.
Secondly, the writer says that these harmful gases also cause people to develop skin cancer. The harmful gases destroy the ozone layer, which are (특정화 해주셔야 연결이 매끄럽습니다) dangerous rays that can touch human skin, and people may get skin cancer. Where as, the professor argues that for the developed skin products, people can protect their skin from the rays. For example, new suncreams can prevent the rays for 6 hours.
Lastly, the author insists that the poisonous gases can lead the acid rain, and that this rain can destroyed the buildings. While, the speaker proposed the idea that developed paint prevent the acid rain seep in to the building cracks. This product can make little risk from the caused damage.
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