■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : A person never should make an important decision alone. |
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▶ Your Answer : It is debatable whether people should never make an important decision alone. This is an intriguing question because opinion concerning this topic can be different relying on the individual perspectives. In my opinion, however, I support that people should never make important decision alone.
First of all, people have narrow view if they decide alone. To be specific, according to the individual perspectives, opinions about something important decision are variable. So asking for other people’s arguments helps people who have to choose more correct determine (무슨 뜻인가요?) in broaden thoughts, especially crucial problem. For example, when (대소문자 구분) was in university, I was concerned whether I should go to exchange student program in USA. I thought alone that this was not beneficial to me because I did not (줄임말 사용을 지양해주세요) have much information (불가산명사입니다) about that program and USA. However, asking my cousin who did the exchange student program in USA, I firmly changed the decision to apply that program. This is due to the fact that I became to (안 가기로 decide alone 했다 -> 다른 사람 말 듣고 맘이 바꼈다 라는 식의 전개가 더 좋을 거 같습니다) know the program’s advantage that I can understand other nation’s culture and it must be helpful to me for finding a job in future. As a result the choice that I went to the exchange program was very beneficial to me and if I have not asked her for her assertion, I would have regretted my resolution.
Determining a (관사) significant matter with other person can improve communication skills. To be specific, it is important to share thoughts and contend to other people like business co-worker and friends in modern society. Discussing my concerns which need to choose have to tell my opinions and listen to the other people’s aspects. In this progress, people should learn consensus methods. If people always make decision alone, they would not know that communicate with others. Eventually, they will not be able to adapt to social life. do not adapt social life. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. A few years ago, I worried if I should live alone leaving my family house. This is a serious problem because it was regarded to lots of money so I asked to my parents. We shared their ideas about the pros and cons when I lived alone and together. In this conversation, I learned adjusting skills and this helped me get along with people whom I had met in company and college. Without the progress of determining matters with my parents, I would have never adapted to such a social place.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that people must not make an important decision alone. All things considered, it is my belief that my argument regarding this issue has been precisely and efficiently delivered with the reasons mentioned above. Never should we forget that this issue may have a huge impact on our future. |
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1. 문법이 상당히 불안정합니다.
특히 would, should와 같은 조동사와 If i had p.p~ I would have~
식의 가정법에서 많이 실수가 나타납니다.
이 부분을 정확하게 숙지해주세요.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*