▶ Your Answer :
In the reading passage, there is ample support for the author's claim that prairie dogs should be exterminated since they aren't beneficial, or rather harmful in various fields. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author's point.
First of all, the professor (professor라고 하면 더더욱 reading과 listening간의 비교가 안 됩니다) contends that the prairie dogs prevent soil erosion. To explain, soil erosion happens due to the rain running on the surface of the soil. However, these animals make the soil looser, which leads to the easier penetration of ground, thus making the erosion less likely to occur. This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that prairie dogs which dig burrows damage land and lead to the breaking of land.
Next, the professor insists that these squirrels do not spread fatal illnesses. He says that most of the (무슨 병인지는 설명이 더 없었나요? 문장 간 연결이 조금 아쉽습니다) diseases which are known to be fatal are originally from other rodents such as rats. The professor also proclaimed that the prairie dogs avoid people, therefore having no physical contact with them. This counters the reading passage's assertion that these creatures spread sickness such as bulbonic plague, and are prone to bite human.
Finally, the professor argues that prairie dogs help raise the nutritional value of the crops. He avows that the nutrients of the plants turn richer when these small animals eat them. (이 부분 listening에 대한 supporting detail이 너무 부족한 편입니다. 조금 더 자세하게 적을 수 있도록 해야 합니다. 앞paragraph와 내용 balance가 어느정도 맞아야 합니다)This refutes the reading passage's suggestion that prairie dogs consume too much of the grass, lading less income to those who raise livestocks such as cattle and other herbivores.
To sum up, the lecture states that Prairie dogs are not a harm, but are useful animals to the environment and people. This casts suspicion to the reading's claim.
the professor from reading?listening?무조건 적어줘야합니다. 어느 상황에서든지 주장 설명 반드시 해주세요. 전체적으로 detail이 부족한 편인 것 같아요. reading내용은 아주 괜찮은데 listening에 대한 detail은 적어도2문장 정도 더 나오면 전체적인 흐름이 더욱 자연스러워질 것입니다. 지금 단계에서는 introduction/conclusion을 적기보다는 main paragraph에 더 집중해서 적는 것이 좋습니다. |