Building a large factory near my community has its own advantages and disadvantages. A large factory could bring numerous problems like water or air pollution , bad effects on human health, and traffic jam. On the other hand, a large factory could bring positive effects like providing jobs.
Certainly, there would be numerous problems for building a large factory near my community. First problem is pollution. A large factory would pollute the streams and the air in my community and the polluted air and water would bring bad effects on human health. For example, In my country, there are some place have large factories. The people in those place have suffered by a polluted air, which is created by the emission of the factory . Because of the polluted air, they have a lot of respiratory diseases. Second problem is the traffic jam. A large factory causes big traffic jam because they need move its products to a market. The need for transportation its products brings many trucks to carry them and these trucks are the cause of the traffic jam.
On the other hand, there are positive effects for building a large factory. First positive effect is that the factory could provide jobs. Generally, a large factory needs more than 3000 people to make a product. Thus, It means that the large factory could give a job for person who has no job and make him or her spend him or her money. Their expenditure would bring positive effects on their community and it would cause more large factory in their community.
All things considered, I think the advantages of building a large factory near my community far weigh the disadvantages because the offering a job to person who have no occupation is more important and would bring a lot of money in the community and that would compensate the pollution matters.
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