■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Your Answer : It is debatable whether technology has made our children less creative than in the past. However, in my opinion, technology is very helpful for children to be more creative because it gives children with many chances (단수/복수) to play with technology and reduce unuseful time they are distracted from other things. To begin with, I think that when children use any technology, they can be more creative than before. Making use of their computer, children can think of their own thought about any products and make a new things. When children use cutting-edge technology for finding interesting ideas and items, They will consider all of conditions and situations which lead to their creativity. For example, Jinwon Kim who is my close friend found a simple code on his computers when he was just nine (아라비아 숫자 사용을 지양해주세요.) years old. Even though he was not an (모음 앞 관사 a는 an으로 교체됩니다) active boy, after he met a computer and technology class in academy he became energetic and always thought seriously, eventually he found a brilliant thing that nobody detected. On top of that, technology helps to reduce situations which is time-consuming and finally offers children with practical time. The majority of children do not have to do something too simple and too complex because these are executed by technology, such as computer or cell phone. Instead of doing these complicated things, children can have a lot of time to focus on developing their creativity. In some article, they said that children can study online practically and there are some studies which have found that children who study with upgrading internet source have more achievement in their academic performance. To sum up, technology never decreases (주어 동사 불일치) children's (소유격 표시) creativity because it helps them to concentrate on their own world and find new things and provide many opportunities to attain knowledge efficiently. In this regard, I strongly agree the statement that technology has advanced our children more creative than in the past. |
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