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There is a debate about whether the rules
that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Some people think that the rules that societies today expect young people to
follow and obey are so strict. However, in my opinion, the rules that societies
today expect young people to follow and obey are not strict because young
people can live safe life and live healthy life.
To begin with, young people can live safe
life. This is because heavy rules make people obey the rules that secure safe.
There are so many things that dangerous situations in the world, and people
have to avoid that bad situations. Moreover, not casing damage to other people
is also important things. Therefore, the rules must be strict. My friend’s
experience could be an example. One day, he went to ski slopes, but he did not
wear cap and gloves. Therefore, his body was injured and damaged to other
people, so the owner was so angry and imposed fine to my friends and let he do
not use again. Thereafter, there are no any bad situations. This shows that the
rules that societies expect young people to follow and obey make their lives
safe. Therefore, not strict at all.
On top of that, young people can live
healthier life when the rules are so strict. This is because the heavy rules
make people do not have poor habits. The stronger rules, the more people avoid
bad habits. My experience could be an example. I was smoking in the city where
I lived in, but there was a rule that the smoker who smoking in the city should
be hit fifty times and should pay enormous money. At that time, I did not have
money and I did not want to be hit. Therefore, I quit smoke and I could have
healthier lives than before. This shows that the strict rules secure
individual’s healthy lives.
To conclude, the rules that societies today
expect young people to follow and obey have more advantages because young
people can live safe life and have healthier life. In this regard, I think that
the rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are not
strict.
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