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There is controversy over whether the earth is
becoming worse place to live due to human action. This argument has been vital
problem nowadays, because there are many environmental issues that make people and
animals to live. I confidently believe that human activity let the earth become
harsh place to live on. The reasoning behind this is that the global warming occurs and atmosphere is polluted by human activity.
To begin with, human and animals are being suffered
from global warming. The global warming means that the average temperature of
surface of the earth is increasing. This is serious problem because it can lead
the water level of ocean to rise, which can be threat to residents who live near
the ocean. Also, the food chain can collapse. According to the food chain, almost
all living things are connected by each others. If one species extinct, the
entire ecology will demolish. However, large portion of people do not consider
as a serious problem, or say her or his utility is more important than environment
and keep doing harmful actions. For example, my uncle drives a large sport utility
vehicle to his work, though he commutes alone. Asked why he continues to use
such a harmful car, he said that the happiness he gets from driving such a expensive
car is far more important than keeping the environment safe. If there were not inconsiderable
behaviors of people, the global warming would be alleviated.
Secondly, actions of human, such as factory,
are main reasons of pollution in atmosphere. In other words, factories and other
constructions made by human emit harmful particles. To be more specific, the quality
of atmosphere is vital to health conditions of human. For example, my country
is recently suffering from microscopic dust flowing from adjacent country. The more
the quantity of pollution come, the more citizens cough. My mother especially coughs
very much when wind brings much dust. Therefore, the manmade faculty is reversely
giving us unpleasant and unhealthy effect.
To conclude, I am convinced that the earth becomes
a worse settlement by human activity because of global warming and air
pollution committed by human actions.
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