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Some people think students with messy rooms achieve greater success than those with tidy ones. However, in my opinion, students with tidy rooms have more accomplishments than students who live in dirty rooms. This is because they are likely to organize their schedules well and be diligent.
To begin with, students (컴마 필요 없습니다) who clean their room well have good performances because they usually have habits that adeptly organize what they have to do in their lives. That is the key factor to success since students have to do a lot of things such as studies, part-time works, club activities and so on. For example, one of my university friends (one of + 복수명사), named Gyung-bae, worked for four hours everyday and also had many activities in his tennis club. He seemed that he did not have any time to study. However, one of his habits was cleaning. that he could not see whatever is messy. He always thought everything should be placed where it was first and his schedule was (시제 -> 과거 시제_) already fixed a week before. That is why he avoided to waste his time and he graduated university with good scores.
On top of that, students who have tidy room are likely to succeed at what they do (succeed는 동사, success는 명사입니다.) providing that they should regularly clean their room to maintain it tidy (철자 오류), which means they are diligent. In other words, it is common for students to lax attitude to cleaning because they feel like lazy after coming back from many activities so cleaning room by themselves requires them to overcome their laziness. For instance, my brother who is a (관사 필요) college student always cleans his room after he comes back home and does it even a day before his final exams. He never delays what he needs to do and he finishes whatever is supposed to be done in time. Inevitably, he has got great scores in his university.
To sum up, students with tidy rooms are able to well organize their to-do-list and likely to be diligent to success. In this regard, I strongly believe that students who have tidy rooms have greater achievements that those with messy ones.
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