■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer : The reading passage states that sucralose
is a harmful substance for human. However, the professor challenges the
statement by suggesting several counterexamples.
First
of all, the reading passage argues that people who have sucralose are more
likely to have diabetes since it makes resistance of the human body to
sucralose even stronger, intervene insulin properly functioning. Conversely, the professor contradicts the argument
by stating that sucralose is not the only reason can trigger diabetes, also
people can suffer from similar symptoms which is not caused by sucralose.
Furthermore,
the author contends that cooking sucralose with high temperature generates
toxic substance by combining with chloropropanols, hence it can cause health
issues. On the contrary, professor counters the contention by suggesting that
the research has a pole. They used higher temperature than normal situation which
can’t prove the side effect properly.
Moreover,
the author asserts that sucralose can invoke allergic reactions, people had
similar symptom after ingesting a product contained sucralose. In contrast,
professor refutes the assertion by maintaining that the symptom is not only too
severe, people can face this symptom by other factors.
In
conclusion, while reading passage claims that sucralose is harmful for body,
the professor cast doubt on the claim by giving several opposing examples.
from reading?or listening? must state해줘야 이해가 갑니다. 우선 주장에 대한 설명 자체가 너무 짧은 편입니다. listening더 자세하게 넣으려고 해야해요. (dictation공부 필수입니다) 그리고 reading도 text에 나오는 거 그대로 적기보다 paraphrase해서 쓰세요 |
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