I stongly believe that parents are not the best teachers because the expectation of them to their children is usually high, and they could not face with their children's study affairs objectly.
Firstly, parents are not the best teachers because they have too much expectation to their children. Parents ,for example, usually request their children to have a job which can earn a lot of money. However, this could surpress their children's dream to have a different job. Generally, a good teacher should encourages children's dream but parents' high expectation do not encourages thoes. In addition parents will not give any room for mistake to have a occupation with a good salary. They think their children should be a man or woman who have a good occupation, so their children must do right things to be a that kind of man and parents do not allow children to do wrong things.
Lastly, parents are not the best teachers because they could not face with their children's study affairs objectly. One of the important aspects of a good teacher is objectiveness because teachers should appraise their students' potential. But parents could not be objective to their children because they are their son and daughter.
As far as I am concerned, parents are not the best teachers because of their high expectation to their children, and their subjectiveness to their children.
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