People have different points of view about class styles. Some people prefer to attend classes which teachers only lecture without a student talking, but others want to enter the classes that the students participate by (participate in)discussions. In my opinion, students' participating the class is better choice because it is effective way for understanding about new knowledge and skills, and it can help to get a career in the future.
To begin with, classes where teachers and students altogether discuss the problems can effectively help comprehend the subjects. Students can have chances of review while other students talk about the subject. Moreover, teachers can be aware of what problems are most difficult for students, and they can prepare to fit their stage of understanding. From my experience, when I had economics class in last semester, that (that 콤마뒤 불가 ->the class) included discussions. Actually, that ware(was) second class to attend a same subject, because it was too difficult to understand myself before. However, in this term of class, I could well understand every problem, since I asked questions to the teacher and discussed my peers. Hence, I got a grade of A in economics. In this respect , 마지막 문장으로 최종 정리하는 한문장 날리기
In addition, this way that includes discussions in the classroom can improve the ability of talking in the face of people that is one of the most required conditions in this competitive society. In particularly, a chance of expressing one’s view is important to increase the ability. According to the research from(the research conducted by) the Ministry of Labor in Korea, an oral test is average fifty percent of determining employment in large enterprises of Korea. Trough practice(By practicing) that occurs in the classroom, students do not need to expand time for oral tests separately.
In brief, I strongly believe that discussion is one of essential parts in classroom, because of easily knowing, and preparing the future. If I have a chance to select the class, including talking each person or not, I surely chose(choose) first one for the reasons I mentioned above.
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