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022. We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion, what are some important characteristic of a co-worker(someone you work closely with)? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important.
What the qualities of good co-worker are sometimes become an interesting issue among people. If someone ask me about this, I will say that making a firm relationship is required to be a good workmate. The firm relationship can be kept by having a spirit of cooperation and responsibility.
First of all, the most important characteristic of a co-worker is a spirit of cooperation. Generally speaking, When we work with teammate, the spirit of cooperation is essential factor for obtaining our goals. If some co-workers have a different opinion about performing our task, we will have some trouble to achieve our goals. Actually, according to a report, conducted by the National Statistical Office, about 43% of respondents, working with many co-workers, think cooperation is the most important factor for achieve their own goals. Like this, a spirit of cooperation is essential factor to be a good co-worker.
Moreover, a co-worker cannot be a good workmate without responsibility for own duty. In general, a sense of responsibility is essential to be a good co-worker. For example, my great co-worker, Cathy, graduated the most renowned university in America. Of course, she is very excellent at her field, managing the marketing task. However, she often absented team meeting due to her private appointment. Because of the lack of responsibility, we cannot trust her anymore. Therefore, responsibility is indispensable factor when we talk about characteristic of a good co-worker.
In conclusion, to be a good co-worker, some important characteristics are required. Those characteristic are a spirit of cooperation and responsibility. Therefore, co-workers should keep in mind those two spirits are essential for our successful work life.
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