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185. You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which whould you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.
If I have enough money to purchase either a house or a business, I will choose a business. I think it's very wise choice. There're three essential things to live - the food, the cloth, the house. So many people may choose a house. But from now, you'll realize why a business is more important than a house.
Primarily, there's no way to make mony after buying a house, while we can earn much more money than before by choosing a business. If I have enough money now, I'll plan for a business immediately. It's not late to purchase a house after a business. As a result of this first reason, I'll purchase a house by sing money which I earned through my job.
Secondly, no one can exist not to work. All the people were born by exxistence which has to work. No matter how someone has much money that can make him or her comfortable all the life, I ensue that he or she can't live without doing some work. For instance, many old people inquire for their job lately. So I persuade you the fact that a business is more important than a house. And I cna't choose any other things but to choose a business.
By these reasons, I persist on a business. As a matter of fact, we cna't live by assigned things like in book. So this choice must be different each people. But the adaptable decision can lead us wise person. Following to each person't situation, it may change. In my situation and my thought, thus, I want to choose the latter one, a business.