When I was young, I always could see numerous flowers and animals anywhere. But , now, a lot of factories and massive buildings fill out natural areas and more and more many people become hard to see the intact nature. Thus, in my country, Korea, there are needs to keep our natural circumstance which remains fortunately and to protect the nature.
To begin with, there has been polluting my country due to excess development of the territory. For having something to want, people started to utilize maximumly their areas and even mountains and rivers. The spot that rivers had to be in there be was fulfilled with massive factories and the mountain that animals had to occupy in there became naked mountain owing to humans' manipulation. That is, areas become arid and disgusting scent and gas make serious disease and barrier. In addition, there is no way of remnant space which could use anymore. People who become have allergy of the skin and the children who do not grow up owing to revealing chemical circumstance are slowly increasing every year.
Moreover, for protecting animals, people should not develop the land anymore. People started to occupy enormous portion of the land, so considerable animals were deprived of their territories. As a result, animals became hard to live in areas which are deliberately made in by humans and bulk of animals was eliminated in my country. Remaining animals , now, live in the zoo or protected facilities. Come to think of it, this land must share with entire animals and plants and we should not utilize for only our goals.
To sum up, albeit developing our territories could be useful for us, I think that excess using of nature may rise serious problems and ,on the whole, for overall existence to live in this land, human's exceeding greed has to be reduced. Provided we are dwindling deliberate exploitation, we would live in the surrounding of more familiar with nature and can give our children brilliant and hospitable land.
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