#029 some people believe that the earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity, others feel that human activity makes the earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people think that the earth has been harmed by human activity, while others think that human activity makes the earth a better place to live. If given to choose one between two opinions, I would like to choose the former as the following reasons. The earth has continuously damaged by human activity, because our exploitations or developments of nature make people lose many precious benefits from the earth and more difficult to live on the earth.
First off, our activity of development is directly leading to the destruction of natural environment. As the number of population is growing, many countries are trying to compete with each other to build houses, factories, and highways first. They may value the comfort of human than other wild lives.# However, this careless decision is## not benefit for human at all, but lethal for human and the earth, because it forces human and animals to give up their airs### to breathe or water to drink. For example, numerous animals’ habitats are deprived and destructed, so they?? become endangered species or already became extinct. Thus, the blind development of human will make the earth wasted land that nothing could survive.
In addition, human activity makes extraordinary phenomenon of nature. If it snows in the middle of summer, nobody would believe it, because it’s impossible to happen. Actually, such unexpected things are occurring around us. For instance, people use their hair spray and refrigerator everyday without knowing that they emits certain gas which is harmful to ozone layers. Due to the destruction of ozone layers, the glaciers in the Antarctic are melting, so it still elevates the average level of oceans. Someday our country or home might be inundated with a sudden uprising of ocean level. In other words, the earth is tormented by human activity and this damage will affect human lives.
Therefore, I believe that the earth has been severely damaged by human activity as above reasons. The more human try to exploit the earth, the more difficulty we cannot help facing. The best way to protect the earth is to use our technology to restore nature.
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