▶ Your Answer : It is debatable whether children grow up in rural areas more advantageous than in big cities. This is an interesting question because opinions concerning this issue can be different depending on the individual perspectives. However, In my opinion, I support the idea that it is more beneficial for kids to grow up in urban areas than in rural areas for the following reasons.
First of all, big cities have more education system compare to the small country areas. It is required for people to a wide variety knowledge rather than deep knowledge of one specific field. A person with a great amount of knowledge is regarded as 'a person of intelligence' in this world. On the other hand, those who have no interest and knowledge in various fields might simply be ignored. For example, when I was in middle school student, I lived in Jae-Cheaon, which is rural in Korea, there was no academy,so in mid-term I had struggle with studying because there was no person who can lend me a hand. Therefore, my score was always so bad. Next year, I moved in Suwon, which is big city in Korea, and there was so many academy for students so I started go math and science academy. After two months, my grade was increased. Also, I got to know about Pythagorean theory and bear's dormancy. Through these experience, I realized that live in city is more get profit for me .
On top of that, I believe that experience is essential factors of success in this world. Imagine that people have only textbook knowledge. Their views will be so narrow. By watching musical in theater and by going exhibition they can not only gain diverse experience but also broaden horizon of the world. For illustrate, In big city, people can go everywhere without time limit. However, In rural, there are no place to enjoy. Even if there is, it takes so much times. Let me bring my mother's experience as an example, When she was in high school, she originally lived in All-ru but she moved in Seoul and she experienced so many things in Seoul. One thing was she joined book club and every weekend she met foreigner friends and talk about books plot. If she had lived in All-ru she would not talk and make new friends.
All things considered, It is my belief that my argument regarding this topic has been effectively and precisely delivered with the reasons mentioned above. Never should we forget that this issue may have a huge impact on our life.
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