■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : A person who ravels in his or her country will gain more than a person who travels abroad. |
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▶ Your Answer :
Some people think that it is better to go on a trip in one’s own country than to go abroad since a person will be able to know about history of country and spend less money and time. However, in my opinion, traveling other country is much better for people for the following several reasons. To begin with, going abroad for trip allows people to broaden horizons. It is obvious that today’s society has become more globalized. (수동태 형태) Through traveling overseas, people enable to know about other countries’ cultures, economics and politics. The knowledge helps people to be globalized ones. As a rule of thumb, for example, when I was in university, I participated in an exchanged semester in USA. During the exchanged semester, I met diverse people who had different races and learned not only language but also various cultures of other country. Through this experience, I realized that I had had a narrow view and I should widen my perspective to live globalized society. If I had not ever been to live in abroad, I was not able to understand my narrow horizons, and never fixed it. On top of that, traveling overseas is able to make more fun for people. What I mean is that totally different atmosphere makes people feel that they are escaping from real life. This serves as a safety valve to let off some steam as well as a fun way to recharge energy. For instance, I will talk about my story to illustrate this point. When I was in university, I usually went on a trip in Korea since I did not have enough money and time. I was not satisfied with my trip because I still thought about my worries such as, assignments and employment. On the other hand, when I was junior in university, I went to Europe on vacation. I was absolutely gratified with this trip. This was because I was able to forget about my reality. That made me enjoy the travel. To sum up, going on a trip to other country has various advantages that people can have broadened perspective and be more entertained. In this regard, I firmly claim that traveling oversea is the better choice (명사 필요) for a person to attain something than traveling his or her country. |
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1. traveling 입니다!
2. 두 번째 바디에서 왜 국내에서는 걱정들을 계속해서 할 수 밖에
없었는지에 대한 이유를 제시해주세요.
ex. 이미 잘 알고 있는 곳이어서
옛날에 와 본 곳이어서
3. 문법에서는 동사 사용에 주의해주세요.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*