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This simple, but disputed matter is regularly
brought to mind. Young people usually watch and idolize their favorite
celebrities because youngsters often think that they have better benefit such
as money or handsome looking. There are some guys who imitate famous men due to
the fact that they want to be like their favorites. (올바른 문장부호) However, celebrities are
not always right. Therefore, I believe that opinions of well-known people might
not be important for young people.
Celebrities can be our hero or heroin,
especially for youngsters. A lot of people may have an experience that they
liked and wanted to be like popular people since when you look at television,
celebrities are always perfect and cool. It might be good to choose a role model, but it might be also dangerous. In television, such as drama or movie, sometimes
someone does the things that are actually not right or healthy for us. For
example, when I saw the movie ‘Oceans,’ a protagonist of the movie steals invaluable
jewelries and eats some weeds. Moreover, she said illegal things are great. The
movie is entirely wrong and must be banned. There are some young people who
think such a criminal things are cool and do those acts in reality. Hence, opinions
of celebrities cannot be important to young people.
On the other hand, most elders hardly like
some men in the television because they have been living a long life, so they
have a sight that celebrities are not perfect and also human beings.
Nevertheless, people on the TV usually state words full of ambitions, and it
can motivate old people’s mind. My grandmother is one of them. She was a
painter in the past, but had given up painting (give up + 동사ing) because she thought she is too old
and paintings are useless. One day, when she and I were (주어 동사 불일치) watching a television
show, a famous painter said that all paintings are masterpieces, and they are
one’s beautiful life. She was motivated by him and started painting. Now she is
selling her pieces. Opinions of celebrities can be important to elders.
Consequently, it is not true that famous
people are related to young people, but not to old people. Celebrities are
influential and powerful these (띄어쓰기) days, and it is important to distribute their
words. Therefore, I disagree that the opinions of popular people are more
important to younger people than they are to older people.
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