■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : Hackers TOEFL ACTUAL TEST WRITING 2nd iBT Edition_ TEST 4 |
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▶ Your Answer :The reading and lecture both talk about the
congestion pricing. The reading says that congestion fee has good effect on
society. The lecturer, however, says that this fee has negative side.
To begin with, the reading author argues
that car accident will be down when congestion pricing is introduced. On (거의 한 단어처럼 쓰이니 참고해 주세요.) the
other hand, the lecturer does not agree with this argument. He says that even
though congestion pricing is started, car accident would not be diminished
because there is a relationship between car speed and accident rate. To be
specific, there is a paper which proved the 30 percent of car accident increased
when speed became faster.
Secondly, the article says that this
pricing makes public transportation system convenient (품사). On the contrary, the
lecturer made opposite argument. He says that it makes public transportation
system less convenient because more and more people will use public
transportation such as bus, so they will feel hard getting on the bus because
the waiting time for bus is too long.
Lastly, the last point made in the reading is
that congestion pricing is good for businesses because it makes them spend less
fuel and time for delivery would be shorter. However, the lecturer casts doubt
on this assertion by insisting that the reality is not true because retailers may
blame (누구를 blame하는 건가요? 목적어가 없습니다. 아니면 retailers may be blamed 인건가요?) at this price. To be more specific, this pricing system would not helpful
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. 디테일이 굉장히 부족한 편입니다.
주어진 자료에서 최대한 많은 evidence를 뽑아서 상세하게 서술해주세요!
3. 사소한 문법 오류가 잦은 편입니다. proof-reading을 꼼꼼하게 해주세요.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*