■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic :HACKERS TOEFL ACTUAL TEST 2ND IBT EDITION TEST 4 |
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▶ Your Answer :The reading and the lecture both talk about
congestion pricing. The reading passage says that congestion pricing is good
system in cities. The lecturer, however, argues that this pricing is not
beneficial to the cities.
To begin with, the article contends that car
accident rate is down when the congestion pricing is introduced. On the
contrary, the lecturer disagrees with this argument. He claims that the
opposite is true because there is a relationship between car accident and speed
of the car. To add that, there is a paper which proved that 30 percent increasing
in speed leads to doubled car accident frequency.
Secondly, in the reading, the author says
that this pricing makes public transportation system more convenient. By
contrast, the lecturer casts doubt on this assertion. He insists that the beginning
is true, but later, congestion pricing makes less this system less convenient
because many people will use public transportation network. For example, people
feel tired waiting for bus.
The final point made in the reading is that
businesses in a city like this pricing. However, the lecturer goes against this
point by stating that the reality is not true because retailers feel decline of
their revenue because congestion pricing deters people from getting into the city for
shopping. In the end, they will blame congestion pricing. |
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1. 동어 반복이 상당히 자주 일어나고 있습니다.
coingestion, pricing 같이 특정 단어가 굉장히 많이 나옵니다.
동의어와 대명사를 적극적으로 활용하셔서 동어 반복을 줄여주세요.
2. 디테일이 굉장히 부족한 편입니다.
주어진 자료에서 최대한 많은 evidence를 뽑아서 상세하게 서술해주세요!
수고하셨습니다. *^^*