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According the reading passage, there is ample support for the author's point. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal for the author's claim.
First, the professor contends that the hammerhead shark's eye does not
Next, the professor insists that there is no evidence that they have a better sense of smell than other sharks. There is another shark that can smell just little blood in big dormitory, (새로운 문장으로 시작해주세요) it means that there is no scientific proof that the hammerhead shark have great sense of smell than other sharks. This counters the reading passage's assertion that the shape of the shark's head also gives it a better sense of smell because their eyes are spaced far apart, so are its nostrils.
Finally, the professor argues that they can not turn back better than other sharks. (대소문자 구분) he mentions that when they move to another direction, they do (주어 동사 불일치) not actually use their head to steering. Scientists found that they can maneuver quickly because they actually have flexible backbone. This refutes the reading passage's suggestion that their unique head shape allows them to turn quickly because their head can act like an airplane's wing.
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. 통합형 에세이에서 conclusion은 굳이 필요하지 않습니다.
3. 철자 오류가 잦은 편입니다. 심한 감점의 요인이 될 수 있으니, 에세이 작성을 마치시고 꼼꼼히 검토해주세요.
+) 단어를 외우실 때 스펠링을 집중적으로 외워주세요.
4. 사소한 문법 오류가 잦은 편입니다. proof-reading을 꼼꼼하게 해주세요.
그 중에서도 특히 주어 동사 일치에 유의해주세요.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*