■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : Being different from others is helpful for achieving success. |
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▶ Your Answer : Some people think that being different from
common people is not useful for achieving success. However, in my opinion, (대소문자 구분) being different from others is beneficial for achieving success. There are two
reasons. First, being similar from common people cannot be outstanding. Second, choosing other things compared to common people gives various opportunities and
experiences.
To begin with, you can be notable when you
do not be like others. We are living in competitive society in terms of hiring
and so on. Therefore, we have to have bizarre things to be outstanding from
others. A recent survey showed that executives of companies prefer unique
applicants rather than prevalent that. According to the study, most of
interviewers wear on black suit and speak very similarly. However, if there is
one who is unique from others, (단수/복수) executives will have chosen the applicants. This
shows that if we have a unique feature, it is helpful for hiring.
On top of that, being different from others
gives us lots of opportunities and experiences. As you know, we tend to follow
our fellows, mates, and friends. Consequently, it does (주어 동사 불일치) not give you many chances.
If you make your own way, you will be easier than do not. For example, the
university held a competition which is writing competition divided into (전치사 필요합니다) two
sections. Most of students were prone to choosing experience based subject. However, I
chose the subject that can imagine anything. Therefore, I could be given an
award from it, but others who chose former subject were hard to get a reward. The
award that I received at the competition was helpful for my college entrance
exam.
To sum up, (대소문자 구분) being different from others has
advantages because it gives us many opportunities and experiences and it is
useful for outstanding from others. In this regard, I strongly believe that
being different from others is helpful for achieving success. |
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. conclusion의 분량을 3문장 이상으로 늘려주세요.
3. choice는 명사이고 choose는 이의 동사 형태 입니다.
그리고 choose의 3단 변화는 choose, chose (과거), chosen 입니다. 참고해주세요.
4. 철자 오류가 잦은 편입니다. 심한 감점의 요인이 될 수 있으니, 에세이 작성을 마치시고 꼼꼼히 검토해주세요.
+) 단어를 외우실 때 스펠링을 집중적으로 외워주세요.