▶ Your Answer : I don't believe that the things (이렇게 모호한 단어 사용은 지양해주세요) shown from movies are not representing the actual world. Because )since로 문장 시작하는 거시 전체 흐름에 더 어울립니다) movies are born to attract people, stimulate people's curiosity. They have to make things exaggerate and sometimes add things which are not even a truth. 맨 처음부터 예시로 시작하기 보다는 주장 main sentence를 적고 그 이후에 예시로 이어나가는 것이 좋습니다) For example, there was a Hollywood movie about the situation that people struggle to be evacuated from the flight crash accident. They were fallen to an unknown land and thatplace was revealed as Eastern Asia. (butㅇ 으로 문장시작하는 것 지양해주세요. 이러한 부분에는 however이 더 잘 어울립니다) But the nature and the environment in the movie were not even close to the actural Eastern Asia. It was described as more likely Amazon. Maybe that movie tried to make heroes stuck in the difficult situaition by take them into an unknown place to make the audience have less information and more into it. Those cinematic technics are often used for the amusement. However, those arise the misunderstanding about countries that are not renowned yet to the people whp watch those movies. The Orientalism is one of the best examples of those midsunderstaings. The scenes that describe Asian countries are mostly just an imagination by western authors and/or artists. It gives the audiences the wrong stereotype. Thus, whenever you watches movies, you should be ready to find out whether the story and setting are fake or truth so that you can have more understanding about the countries you haven't experienced.
문장을 적을 때 무조건 자신감있게 자신의 주장을 펼친다, 하는 생각으로 적어야 합니다. 또 이해가 가지 않는 문장들이 꽤 보이는 편입니다. 문장 적을 때 무조건 연결성이나 문장 간 흐름 주의해서 적는 것 중요하고 영작 연습 많이 필요할 거 같습니다. spelling오류는 절대 없도록 적어야 합니다 |