Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of it. Use specific reasons and examples in your answer.
I am on the school volleyball team and I have made a commitment to come to practice everyday after school until 5 o’clock. There are others that spend more time than I do. To spend time in a sport, there are many disadvantages and advantages.
First of all, it is an advantage because it enables your body to become healthier and by sweating, you excrete bad substances in your body. It can also be a disadvantage because too much exercise and exercising more that your body can handle may ruin your body. It is wise to do the appropriate amount and become healthy instead of exercising too much and ruining your body.
Secondly, there are other things important to do such as studying and spending time with your family. It is a disadvantage if young children who attend school spend their time only in sports and do poorly in academics. It can change their future life. But if you do enough, practicing sports can enable you to think more clearly and have positive effects on you while studying.
Last of all, spending great amounts of time in practicing sports can be an advantage for young students. As people say practice makes perfect, they can master skills in a particular sport. They can also use those skills to compete against others in their free time and enjoy the sport they practiced.
I have listed a few advantages and disadvantages of spending a great amount of time in practicing sports. Of course there are lots more but I think that those were the most important ones. I personally enjoy sports and by writing this essay, it helped me realize that I must not spend too much time but the appropriate amount.
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