■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : hackers practicen 문제라 이유가 2개 입니다. |
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▶ Your Answer :In the reading passage, there is ample support for the author's claim that Mima mound is constructed by wind and glaciers. However, the professor in the lectures gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author's point. First, the professor contends that glacier is not the factor that makes Mima mound. Mima mound can be seen in (전치사 필요) diverse climate. Also glaciers can appear in the regions where glaciers are not formed like Mexico and southeastern (철자 오류) USA. This casts (주어 동사 불일치) doubt on the reading passage's claim that melting glaciers cause debris settled down. Second, the professor insists that there are some physical trait that Mima mound cannot (줄임말 사용을 하지 말아주세요.) be affected by wind. Grains are too heavy to be carried by wind. If the wind is main cause of Mima mound formation, It would look uneven - not round. This counters the author's assertion that origin of Mima mound is sediment carried by the wind. |
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. 디테일이 굉장히 부족한 편입니다.
주어진 자료에서 최대한 많은 evidence를 뽑아서 상세하게 서술해주세요!
(인트로와 길이가 엇비슷합니다.)
3. introduction의 분량을 3문장 이상으로 늘려주세요.
4. 문장 뒤에 마다 엔터키를 치지 마시고 문단 별로 구조를 정확하게 나눠주세요.
스페이스바면 충분할 것 같습니다.
5. 바디가 총 세개 있어야 하는데 지금 두 개 밖에 없습니다.
시간 조절을 잘 하셔서 세개를 꼭 써주시기 바랍니다.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*