■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic :A/DA It is better to study alone than in a
group
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▶ Your Answer :
Some people think that studying alone is better than group work.
However, I disagree with the idea that it is a better way for students to study
alone for the following two reasons. First, people can improve their
relationships. Second, people can strengthen a sense of responsibility.
Second, teamwork team work improves the sense of responsibility. To be specific, all group members are aware that their performance affects the group, so all group members try to do their best and work hard to get better results. Let me bring my personal story as an example, a few years ago, some of my friends and I participated in a competition which was related to optimization. Since there were a lot of things to do, we divided the topics among each other. We did not have enough information about one of the shared parts. However, a person who got that subject made a lot of effort to learn the topic well. He attended online courses and read books related to that field. Eventually, he accomplished a great job. What I am trying to say The point is that in a group working, even if a person does not have enough information related to his or her working area, he or she may learn the things with his or her effort because he or she knows that a mistake will cause negative outcomes.
In conclusion, studying in a group helps people to improve not only
their relationships and the sense of responsibility. That is, studying in a
group give students advantages in various respects. In this regard, I strongly
insist that studying in a group is a better way for students than doing alone. |
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