제가 쓴 에세이 입니다..
정말 엉성하기 그지 없습니다만..
함 읽어 주시고 이상한 부분이나 말이 되냐 싶은 부분을 한마디라도 달아주시면 다음에 쓸때 꼬옥 염두해두고 쓰겠습니다..
담주가 셤인데 스스로도 답답한 마음이 어찌나 큰지....
7. How do movies or television influence people's behavior?
When it comes to media, some people say that it has powerful influence, others have different opinion. I convinced that TV influenced people's actions for three other reasons ; as providing a educational tool, making the mood of discussion, and giving the new experience.
First of all, it is important for people to use media as a educational tool. Movies show other country to people who look and listen them. Two weeks ago, I saw the movie named " Out of Africa" that dealt with love between man and woman surrounding Africa. Throughout the move, I can more understand about Africa's natural environment than just read books.
Secondly, TV programs make ground of discussion. Among the TV programs, there is useful program that connected discussion. Our family get together to see the panal " Clinic of mate" which talk about trouble of couple. After seeing the program, we always give and take oneself's opinion. Through this program, we can share other's thinking.
The final reason, we can know new, different culture from TV. It's a good example to see the documentary programs or films. Two months ago, our local broadcasting makes documentary about tribe's life. Maybe, I can't experience those life style as well as I can't go there during my lifetime. Because there is TV programs, I can surely understand.
It is certainly that TV and film influence people's behaviors. We can use the TV as a efficient educational tool, have the opportunities that give people field of discussion, and earn various experience that isn't easy.
읽어 주셔서 감사합니다..
paraphrasing은 어떻게 연습하면 좋을까요?
행동에 영향을 미친다.. 이걸 어케 바꾸면 좋나요? (--;)
고딩때도 작문이 사람피말리더니..
이젠 영작이라니.... 참.... --;