■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic :
At times people should do certain things that they might not necessarily enjoy. Is this statement you are in agreement or disagreement? |
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▶ Your Answer :
There might be some people who think that people should not do certain things that they might not enjoy. However, I personally disagree with the above idea for two subsequent reasons. First, people need to study or work hard to achieve a goal. Second, people should do many hassle things to maintain their daily lives.
To begin with, a goal cannot be achieved without efforts. Generally speaking, if you are a student, you need to study hard to enter one of the best universities, or if you are working at a company, you should do demanding work to promote. In other words, achieving a goal is needed many not entertaining things. If people do not endure those activities, they will not get what they want. Let me bring up my personal story as an example. When I was a high school student, my aim was to enter Hanyang university, which was one of the best film schools in South Korea. Accordingly, I always had to do a large amount of study that included every subject taught in high school. Therefore, I could stop studying only when I was sleeping. Doing study was needed so much energy and concentration that I was stressed out and exhausted, but with these efforts, I could enter the university I wanted to.
On top of that, just sustaining a daily life is not a simple process. In general, people should do a number of things to spend a day. The first step is to wake up, which is one of the most challenging and not exciting things to do for every person in the world. Moreover, they should take a shower every day, get dressed, get off the clothes all the time. What this means is that people always should do many unpleasant things not only to attain their desire, but also to maintain their routines. For instance, when I studied, I had to do many other things like brushing my teeth, eating meals three times every day, and waking up at 6 AM. These activities were not directly related to study, but they were needed to support my daily life. They were often felt not only time-consuming but also annoying, but I should do those not amusing things all the time. There is no exception today.
In a nutshell, people should do bothering things to get what they want. Furthermore, they should do those things to sustain their routines. In this regard, I strongly think that certain things that people might not enjoy are needed if they choose to live. |
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. 수동태로 쓰이면 안 되는 부분이 수동태로 쓰인 경우가 종종 있습니다.
다시 말해 동사 앞에 be 동사가 필요 없고 그냥 자동사처럼 쓰이면 되는 부분이
수동태로 쓰여져있다는 말씀인데요,
능동태와 수동태 용법을 정확하게 숙지해주세요.
3. 이유 두 가지는 모두 합리적으로 잘 작성된 것 같습니다.
사례도 적절하게 잘 쓰였습니다.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*