▶ Your Answer : Some people
think that moving to new city make you lose your old friends. However I have
opposite opinion about that. Because friendship is not the matter of distance and
we can overcome this obstacle in 21 century.
To begin
with, I do not think that true friendship would be disturbed by distance. Because 너무 반복적으로 나옵니다. (뒤에도 또 나오네요) we love friends because he or she is my friends but not because of proximity. Some
survey was conducted by Human resource lab in south korea to determine whether
distance is effect friendship with 20s college students as respondents. The
overwhelming 65% had announced that distance is not a problem. While 35% had still
asserted that distance is important, the result shows that there is more
important checklist to determine he or she is my friends or not. The researcher
accounted that this is because people tend to think friendship is matter of
heart but not physical.
On top of this,
there are many methods to contact with friends nowadays. For example, facetime,
zoom, even online games can give us an opportunity to maintain friendship. Let
me give you the example of my friend who are in the USA now. He and me meet at
virtual land on online game at every Sunday. So we feel same attachment even
though we are at 2000km apart.
To sum up,
losing friends is not kind of distance problem and there is so many apparatus that
may help us to maintain friendship. In this regard, I do not think it is bad idea 이렇게 꼬아꼬아 적지 말고 부정은 한번만 해주는 게 좋습니다to go to new region because of friendship.
우선 어휘가 아주 기본적인 편입니다. 쓸 때 앞에 이미 나오지는 않았는지 생각하고 최대한 동의어로 바꿔서 적어줘야 합니다. 그리고 수일치가 전혀 되지 않고 있습니다. 시제나 콤마 오류 등 문법 오류가 정말 많은 편이니 특히 신경써서 proof reading해줘야 합니다.
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