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Some people think that the benefits of participating in club activities are not as many as that you can get from academic studies. However, in my opinion, I believe that the club activities can give a bunch of benefits for students rather then academic studies. This is because people can meet a lot of people through the club activity and this can help you experience a various things.
To begin with, the club activities can be very beneficial for people since this makes people meet a lot of people. These days, the importance of a wide range of relationship with various people is growing. This society is a human network oriented world, therefore, people need to build a wide friendship with others. People need a broaden relationships because they can help when you are in trouble or in need of help. For example, when I was a high school student, my goal was to enter the university in USA. I prepared for this really hard, but there is a serious problem with finding a home to stay in the California. So I told my friend about my situation, and surprisingly the friend said that she has one uncle who are living in California so she might ask him for help. Thank to my friend, I could find a fancy room to live with reasonable price and solved the problem easily. After that experience, I noticed the importance of human relationship.
On top of that, people can experience a variety of things through the club activity. I do admit that academic study can help people to grow their ability in specific field. However, it is not the text book knowledge that you have, but the experience that you gain from a real world, that makes you succeed in the future. As the society is becoming more complex, companies require more than just a textbook knowledge. For instance, my older sister had a goal to get into SAMSUNG which is considered as the best paying job in Korea. In order to achieve her goal, she studied really hard and got a perfect grade in university. However, she failed to get in the company because she was lack of a standing out experience such as a club activity. This shows the importance of the variety of special activities in this society.
To sum up, I think that the club activities can give a bunch of benefits for students rather then academic studies since people can meet a lot of people through the club activity and this can help you experience a various things. In this regard, I disagree with the statement that the benefits of participating in club activities are not as many as that you can get from academic studies.
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