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The lecturer argues that automated survey is inefficient and
inauccurate. This contradicts the reading passage's claim that this type of
survey has several advantages.
First of all, the lecturer argues that automated survey takes
longer to complete survey. The speaker maintains that they has high
non-response rate. For example, people will hang up when machine gives
question. However people will not hang up when live representatives because
they do not want to be rude. This casts doubt on the reading which states that
automated survey can reach more quickly the target number of people.
In addition, according to the speaker, It is not true that
automated surveys increase the chance of receiving accurate answers from
respondents. The speaker explains that It is no way to confirm identify. For
example, young child enjoy delivering false response. However, human can
confirm wrong situation and properly action. This refutes the reading passage's
assertion that the chance of receiving accurate answers from respondents is
increased by automated surveys.
The final point made by the lecturer is that It is not fact that
probability of errors is lower when automated systems are used to conduct
surveys. The speaker says that if automated survey states correctly,
respondents can misunderstand it. While machine move on the next, human gives
repeat and clarify question. This rebuffs the reading passage's arguments that
automated survey's error is lower because they delivered obvious answers.
점수: 22 리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족한 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요하게 보는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우는 리딩에 대한 부분을 한 문장으로만 서술하였는데. 한 문장으로 끝내는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박할 수 있는 부분들을 더 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다.
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