▶ Your Answer : There might be some people who believe that students who have clean rooms would be more succeful than those who have rooms unorganized. However, I personally disagree with the above the idea for the following two subsequent reasons.
To begin with, success is brought up by creativeness. According to a study by Korea Creation Association, children who have tidy rooms tend to be obssessed with cleaning, which made them think only within finite range. On the other hand, students who do not care their rooms are highly likely to be creative. A survey was conducted by Korea Education Assocition in 2000 with 500 citizens as respondents. The purpose of it was to understand the consensus view whether well-organized children have good grades. The majority had not admitted the statement. The overwhelming of 80% had claimed that since children who were obssessed with cleaning rooms were not likely to think beyond cleanliness, they would be think and behave in stereotyped. Thus, they could not be creative and would not be successful. The poll shows that people have a negative view on cleanliness is related with success.
On top of that, leaving rooms messy can make children save time to develop themselves. To be specific, students who do not cleans rooms can use their time more efficiently than those who always clean ones. This leads them to invest time in self dicipline or develop, such as studying, athletes, hobbies, socializing. For example, I will talk about my experience to illustrate this point. When I was in middle school, I was so obssessed with cleaning room that I always were in alert to keep it clean, which made me focus on cleaning even when I sit on for studying for exams. I could not earn good grades due to that obssession. One day, my teacher advised me not to be obssesses with it, and just focus on studying. He said a messy room did not count. After that, I tried to focus only on studying, ignoring some messy ones on my rooms. Finally, I could get attain good grades since I could use time more efficiently before than.
To sum up, success is from creativeness, which is highly possesses by students who have rooms messy. Moreover, students who do not clean rooms can save time more efficiently for achieving goals. In this regard, I firmly believe that students who have messy rooms are less likely to be successful.
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