■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer :
Some people think that the main role of a university professor is to do research rather than educating students. While other do not think so. Personally, I think focusing on their research is better than focusing on teaching students for following two reasons To begin with, great studies conducted by professor inspire students to study more harder. In addition, it attracts many students entering the university. For example, when I was 20, I considered whether I go university or not. At that time, I was interested in elite sports. I searched well-known professor in this field so as to get some information. One professor at Seoul University conducted a study regarding elite sports. It makes me to study harder since I wanted to conduct a study with him. Finally I entered the Seoul university and conducted a study with him. His study inspires me and makes me study harder. On top of that, great studies can make world a better place to live. In Korea, many people suffer from fine dust. Korea government tries to do many things to solve this problem. However every effort does not work. One well known professor invents an air purify device. And his study suggests that air condition will get to improve through this device. When putting his new ideas into practice, air condition is improved To sum up, great studies conducted by professor inspire students. Moreover great researches make the world better to live. Considering this, professor should focus on research rather than educating students
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1. 철자 오류가 잦은 편입니다. 심한 감점의 요인이 될 수 있으니, 에세이 작성을 마치시고 꼼꼼히 검토해주세요.
+) 단어를 외우실 때 스펠링을 집중적으로 외워주세요.
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3. 내용은 괜찮습니다.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*