▶ Your Answer : In my childhood, my parents
reprimanded me because I was engrossed to computer game while all member of
family worked the household tasks, merely classifying the trash in order to
recycle. Obviously, my manner was wrong, and it is right that I should have
helped with household tasks firstly. Thus, I think that children should be
required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do for
following two subsequent reasons.
First and foremost, it is a filial duty for
children to help the household tasks. Parents always take care of children
after they born they are born. They would be nearly impossible to sustain the life without
the sincere devotion of parents. In order to express thankfulness, they should
try to reduce the parents' burden by helping the household as possible. Unbeknownst to Americans, the concept of
filial duty is a traditional culture in the region of east of Asia. For example, in the case of the Korea, there
exists a traditional culture, 'Hyo', which means the filial duty based on the Confucianism.
Nowadays, the concept, Hyo' is still taught in the elementary school.
Yesterday, I have seen a ten-year-old child who live lives (child는 단수 주어 입니다) in the neighborhood always
helped households. According to his parents, the frequency of helping with
household tasks was significantly increased after he learned the 'Hyo' in the
elementary school.
Secondly, a lack of helping with
household considerably brings about the severe matter after children grow up.
Because most of household tasks are done by parents, they lose an opportunity
how to do household and such negative habit would be preserved. Thus, if they
grow up and marry someone, such deficit would be revealed prominently. Indeed,
one of the main reasons couple are divorced is related to household. For
example, 'Love and affair' was one of the high-profile programs in the South
Korea. The actor or actress performed
the plot and show the viewer the reason the couple was divorced. The remarkable
scene that I could recall was about household; The husband had no experience of
household after they born, so they did not help household at all. Even though she was angry about his manner,
he did not understand why I should do the household tasks.
In a nutshell, I think that children should
be required to help with household tasks because it is a filial duty for
children to help the household and a lack of helping with household beget the
severe matter in the future.
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