▶ Your Answer : In the reading passage, there are ample support for the author's claim that there are many causes that can make rain look red in Kerala. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author's point with following subsequent reasons. First, the professor contends that it has no relationship between red rain and bat's blood. It requires about five millions of bat to produce red rain. Also there should be bones or wings in Kerala if the large amount of bats were decimated in the air by thunderstorm or meteor bust. This casts doubt on the reading passages's claim that bat's blood accounted for the strange weather, which was proved by DNA founded in the red rain drops. Next, the professor insists that it is difficult to explain the bizarre phenomenon with volcanic eruption in the Philippines. It was the fact that volcanic eruption occurred in Philippines. However, it is nor easy to accept that the impact of the volcanic eruption such as dust and particles did reach only the Kerala not the Philippines that is the place having volcanic activities. It does not make sense that red rain drop could not be founded in Philippines. This counter the reading passage's assertion that the dust from the volcanic eruption made rain like a supernatural phenomenon through chemical reactions. Finally, the professor argues that pollution from the factory did not cause the red rain in the Kerala. There were a few factories in this region and there were many other cities that could generate more chemical pollutions than Kerala. If the author's assertion were was (assertion는 단수 주어 입니다) true, there would have been the great amount of cities that experienced red rain. This refutes the reading passage's suggestion that the chemical pollution from a non-filtered chimney is the culprit of making red rain.
점수: 23 리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족합니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 지를 보는 것 입니다.. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우에 있어서는 리딩에 대한 부분이 각 단락에서 한 문장으로만 서술하였는데. 한 문장으로 끝내는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박할 수 잇는 부분들을 더 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셧습니다.
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