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My hometown is a beach city. It is a very attractive place to visit, but it should supplement more things to be a more alluring place for people. From my point of view, diverse festivals and better public transportations are needed. My hometown needs diverse and more festivals to attract more young people. People in my age enjoy various festivals and events. For example, I enjoy dancing in the Electronic Digital Music festival party every year, even though the place is far from my hometown. I visit other cities to see famous entertainers when they hold concerts. My hometown, however, has few festivals, whereas many people visit every year. To attract more people, my hometown should hold more festivals taking advantages of regional features. A lot of people visit beach cities to enjoy tanning, swimming, and festivals because not every people live nearby a beach. My town can hold so many events like beer drinking competitions, waterjet festivals, and even firework shows on the beach. By doing so, my town can attract more people to visit the town every year. My town can be one of the greatest places to visit in the summer in Korea. My hometown has to improve the public transportations for better convenience of people. People nowadays like to drive their private cars. The thing that matters is that too many cars occur much inconvenience of people. For example, sometimes, I have trouble to go somewhere because of traffic congestion. However, I had no many options because there are fewer subway lines and buses than in other cities. This poor public transportation cause people unwilling to visit my hometown. The better public transportations the city has, the easier people can enjoy the city. The easier people can enjoy the city, the more people can visit the city. Like this, perfect transportations have good effects not only on the people living in the town but also on the people visiting the town. In conclusion, I extremely feel that more festivals and better public transportations are required to be a fascinating place for people my age because p can enjoy colorful festivals using well-developed public transportations.
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