■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : Hasty decisions are never the right ones. (토플 정규 라이팅 Actual test 1번 문제입니다) |
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▶ Your Answer :
Managing how fast people decide is important because it
shapes peoples’ lives. With this understanding, I believe that hasty decisions
are the right ones for two reasons. This is because hasty decision enables
people to get less stress and enjoy a better quality of life.
First, hasty decision enables people to get less stress. Understanding
the daily environment of people and the potential role of hasty decision is
necessary to substantiate this view. Every morning, people are at work, they
have to deal with countless documents and decide several tasks. Such exhausting
routine repeats itself and eventually wears down people. Thus, people should do
hasty decision, including contemplate about the works, to reduce time and
stress. As a way to manage the ensuing stress, people can make hasty decision.
This frees their minds from the intense mental pressure from work. In this
regard, hasty decision enables people to get less stress.
Second, In response to the increasing role of hasty decision,
many expert opinions and research statistics reinforce the idea that hasty
decision enables people to strengthen competitiveness in society. According to
the recent research conducted by Linkedin, 60 percent of 200 Korean leading
recruiters prefer people who decide quickly. Recruiters show such a tendency
because they tend to be more prefer proficient and effective person. In the
long-run, in-time manner and quick feedback enhance overall work performance.
This not only results in job promotions but also encourages them to ultimately
enjoy a better quality of life. In this regard, hasty decision enables people
to strengthen competitiveness in society.
To sum up, I believe that hasty decisions are the right ones
for the following reasons: to get less stress and enjoy a better quality of
life. Consequently, the importance of my view cannot be underestimated for the
reasons I have mentioned above.
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추가적으로 질문하자면, 템플릿을 참고한 글인데
'링크드인에서 전문가들이 말한 것처럼~'과 같이 통계를 나타내는 문장을 사실여부에 상관없이 삽입해도 문제가 없을까요?
감사합니다.