■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the abiltiy to make many new friends easily. |
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▶ Your Answer :
Some
people might think that the ability to make many new friends easily is more
important than to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a
long period of time. However, in my opinion, maintaining old friendships is
more important for happiness. There are three reasons. First, they are always
there for me. Secondly, more understanding each other. Thirdly, making light
friendships bring out lonely feelings. I will explain my views in the following
essays.
To
begin with, long friendships always spend time together regularly. That is to
say, they are willing to help anytime. For instance, my friend and I have met
in elementary school. So we have spent time by sharing our life. She is one of
my happiness which makes plentiful my life. This shows that having a old friend
are good for happy life.
Secondly,
maintaining people over a long period of time makes comprehensive knowledge of
friends. To put it again, people do not act to hide their drawbacks. For
instance, I met new friends in University and they ate food fast. I had slow
pace to eat food but I matched their speed. Because I didn't want to reveal my
sensitive point. As a result, eating something with new friends was really hard
time for me. Contrastively, my old friends have understood my pace and I have
eaten food in peaceful mind. This shows
that long relationships are more beneficial than new friends.
Lastly,
new friends are not usually helpful for people. This means that they are just
friend to say hello. I will talk about my experience as an example. When I was
sick, new friends just sent message for me but old friends came in my home and
helped me to recover. This is a good example that demonstrate new friends cannot
become more good friend than old friends.
To
sum up, I strongly think that maintaining friendships with a small number of
people over a long period of time is more important for happiness. When we
belong to old friends group, we can cheer up by them.
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