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There might be
some people that believe that the government should spend more money on art
galleries than parks due to their personal interest. However, I disagree with
the above idea. There are two major reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, all
of the government’s payment must be utilized for the whole members of the
society. In this sense, parks can be a clever option due to the fact that they
are faculty for a wide range of people. In contrast, a few people who have
interest in art are existed in this society. Although, as I was becoming older with
the flow of time, I was slightly getting to like to go art galleries. I
extremely hated to go art galleries with my parents when I was child. Also there
are numerous people like almost children who have no knowledge and interest in
any art sections. Thus, art galleries is not a reasonable choice.
On top of that, exercise
in parks can be the way to relieve stress and keep one’s health. Having the
outlet of stress has a meaning in itself since it helps one regain energy and
find the strength to go on. People nowdays have pressure not only physically
but also mentally. After following a trail of the near park and feeling the
fresh air, they will be able to get back on track. The study was conducted by a
group of experts to determine whether the distance between one’s home and the nearest
park could affect the level of stress with 2000 people who lived in Seoul as
participants. What the researcher found was intriguing. The outcome showed that
the group of people who lived in dwelling located in 500 meters from the
nearest park had significantly lower level of stress compared to other people.
The reason was that the parks could be a resting place from their stressful routine.
This study demonstrates the importance
of parks about mental health for urbane people.
To sum up, parks
are generally more useful to many people rather than art galleries and excercise
in the parks enables us to keep our shapes and to have one method to relieve
stress. In this regard, I firmly believe that the government have to spend
citizen tax on park. 예상 점수도 적어주시면 감사하겠습니다! 20점이 목표입니다 ㅜㅜ
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