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There might be some people who believe people should spend more time with families than spend their time at work, while others does not agree with the above idea. Both camps have their own reasons to support their perspectives. If I had to choose one, I would like to say that spending our time at work is more efficient than spending our time with families. There are some reasons and examples as follows.
To begin with, spending more time at work enables people to get a promotion at work quickly. As you know, the more time people spend at work, the more productivity it is increasing. When people show their good performance at work, it is easy to get a chance to promote at work. For example, when I started my job, as a physical therapist in SNUH hospital. I tried to spend more time in order to treat many patients at work. As a result, my boss was surprised with my performance and satisfaction of my patients. I could promote as a manager faster than any others who joined the hospital with me at the same time. On top of that, when people take enough time at work, they can improve their skill and accuracy about their work. This allows people to have high self-satisfaction. When people can do their work perfectly, they can possess the confidence about themselves. According to the article about psychology I have seen a few days ago, people can feel more fullness and happiness, when they are good at their work. In addition, people who are proud of their jobs shows healthier mental states and low depression than people who do not satisfied with their works. These examples demonstrate the importance of spending more time at work.
To sum up, I strongly believe that people should spend more time at work than spend their time with families given that its advantages far outweigh its disadvantages. In this regard, the importance of my view cannot be underestimated for the reasons I have mentioned above. |