■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic :reading passage: 5일간 일하는 근로자를 고용하는 것 보다 4일간 일하는 근로자를 고용하는 것이 좋다! |
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▶ Your Answer :
In
the reading passage, there is ample support to the author’s claim. However, the
professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author’s
point.
First, the professor argues that the companies
which hire four day workers have to spend more money, due (구 는 단독으로 쓰일 수 없습니다) to the fact that the
new employees need training and medical insurance which consume companies' (소유격) money. Also, expenditure for more computers and spaces would cut into companies benefits.
This casts doubt on the reading passage’s claim that the choice will be beneficial
to the companies financially.
Next, the professor insists that companies
would want their employees who work for (for과 during의 차이점 숙지가 필요합니다.) four days in a week to work harder (hard의 비교급은 -er이 붙은 harder 입니다) to do the same
job for five days. Since when the companies hire new employees, the companies must
to pay more fee and they would not want it. It makes the employees unpleasant.
This counters the reading passage’s assertion that it increases (주어 동사 불일치) the employment ratio.
Finally, the professor claims that there are
some risks for employees to choose working four days. Due to the fact that they
would lose their jobs firstly because the companies prefer the workers who work
five days to others who work only four days. This refutes the reading passage’s
suggestion that workers can use their free time and it improves their quality of
life.
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1. introduction에서 topic이 무엇이고
어떻게 의견이 갈리는지를 간단하게 언급해주세요.
2. 디테일이 굉장히 부족한 편입니다.
주어진 자료에서 최대한 많은 evidence를 뽑아서 상세하게 서술해주세요!
3. due to the fact that ~~ 는 불완전한 문장입니다.
반드시 완전한 문장 형태로 글을 작성해주세요.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*