■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer :
There is ample support to author’s claim that
reading less literature leads to negative effects in diverse aspects. However,
a professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author’s
points.
First, the professor argues that there are
lots of reading sources which have high quality instead of literature. For
example, some books of science, history and political analysis also can motivate
people to be creative and imaginative. This counters the author’s suggestion
that decline in reading literature results in less intellectual thinking.
Next, the professor claims that there are many
alternatives for reading literature. For example, listening to brilliant music
and watching remarkable movies are valuable as well as reading literature. Due
to the fact that culture is changing with the flow of time, literature is not
only the general cultural form. This casts doubt on the author’s claim that
spending time on (올바른 전치사) diverse entertainments, instead of reading literature, diminishes
the level of culture.
Finally, the professor insists that anyone
cannot blame readers since less concern in literature is a result of author’s
fault. There are not much reasons to explain less attention in literature. The
only reason is that their writing skills are too difficult and complicated for
general people to read. This refutes the author’s assertion that poor standards
of readers are the cause of diminution of literature. (of가 너무 자주 반복됩니다)
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1. introduction의 분량을 3문장 이상으로 늘려주세요.
2. reading and listening의 비율이 너무 listening쪽으로만 치우쳐져 있습니다.
비율은 5:5, 적어도 6:4 정도는 되어야 합니다.
이는 리딩에 대한 디테일 부족으로 이어지며, 분량 부족, 추가 설명 실패 등으로 이어질 수 있으니
리딩에서도 evidence를 많이 찾아서 써주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*